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    Default Barely consented

    This concept isn't new, so don't call me out. Me & Unapprehending Nondecalcification are pretty much experimenting & trying to make our own MSPA like Homestuck. I hope you enjoy. Just suggest the next move & we'll draw it!



    A young man at the age of 16 stands in his room.
    What will this young man's name be?
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    Yuuji.

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    Your name is Paul.
    You stand in your room with your shiniest microphone in hand.
    What will you do?
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    Throw it out of the window

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    Attempt to eat it like an icecream

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    Show it to your mum.

    Remember what you said about being a friend now?
    The movement in her hips strikes the hour when the poison sets in
    How do you wake?
    How do you sleep at night?
    Remember what you said

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    You attempted to eat "IT" but it wasn't very good... you figured mum wouldn't like it
    So you just threw "IT" out the window instead
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    he jumped out the window while eating his mums face
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    for a second I thought he was holding something else in his hand

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    Make him take a poo in the dustbin.

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    He dived into the trash can searching for rotten apples

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    You consider pooing in the dustbin... for completely ironic reasons of course.
    But it appears the dustbin is full.
    You also own a toilet to do your buisness
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    He then kisses the JB poster

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    he then meets john egbert

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    he then eat his mum alive

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    The neighbours come over, and they smell.

    Remember what you said about being a friend now?
    The movement in her hips strikes the hour when the poison sets in
    How do you wake?
    How do you sleep at night?
    Remember what you said

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    Quote Originally Posted by Savlonic View Post
    You consider pooing in the dustbin... for completely ironic reasons of course.
    But it appears the dustbin is full.
    You also own a toilet to do your buisness
    SUGGESTION FOR STORYTELLING:

    If you want this to be unique, don't rely too heavily on Hussie's style. "For completely ironic purposes" is COMPLETELY a reference to Dave. If no one knew about the pre-existing scenes, you are now starting to define your character in a way that is already, IMO, TOO similar to Dave from HS.

    Give him his own interests. Give him his own personality.

    Just a suggestion.
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    Also what's wrong with paul's eyes?

    Raar!

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