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    WARNING: STORY CONTAINS ROUGH LANGUAGE

    Part 1:

    PROLOGUE

    Jiggmin's Village was a peaceful country near the Atlantic ocean, on the coast of Europe. There haven't been any wars since the first WW. Jiggmin's Village had many cities, the most important were "Jiggmin's Games", which it was the hollywood of the country, where the games and the movies were made. Artistry Ochard was an important city too, all the artists in one city, isn't it beautiful? But the last and more important was the "Discussion Hall", the capital of the country, that's where the most people and the king lived. Last but not least there was a town, in the east commons, called Library of the Ancients, which no one have ever seen, expect Chris Zero, JoMan and Ymmot. Also knows as the Legendary Trio. They were philosophers who built the town years ago. They had thousands of books in their libraries and temples, including all the world's scientist secrets. Well, no one has ever seen this town, since now....

    12TH DECEMBER 2012, 1:00 PM

    It was a cold night in Discussions Hall, everyone was sleeping, even King Jacob (Aka Jiggmin), expect the two guards, who were guarding the place almost 24/7.

    Bisser (Guard 1): What are we waiting for? There haven't been any disturbances in days, it's pointless man, I tell you! And it also..

    Ross (Guard 2): Shut up! I see someone in the horizon!

    Bisser: Oh god, am I seeing right? Is that the Legendary Trio?

    Ross: I believe it is. Look at them. Holy Crap! They are mortally wounded... We should call the King...

    Bisser: JAAAAAAAAACOOOOOOOOB! WE GOT VISSIIITORS!!!

    Jiggmin: *wakes up, exits house* WHO THE HELL DO YOU THINK YOU ARE??? Do you know what time is it? We are all trying to sleep in here!

    Ross: Jacob, listen, the legendary trio is mortally wounded outside, we should open the gates!

    Jiggmin: The Legendary Trio?... OPEN THE GATES! OPEN THE GATES

    *2 minutes later, after the soldiers open the gates*

    JoMan drops dead after carrying Chris Zero's dead body. However Ymmot looks the least wounded, and he is still standing still.

    Jiggmin: Doctor!!! Come! We got injured people there!

    ColdFire (Doctor): What is it?

    Jiggmin: Look if these people are alive, we need them, they are legends goddammit!

    ColdFire: Allright, allright, I will take a look at them.

    *5 minutes later after a "long waiting" check from the Doctor*

    ColdFire: These 2 people are dead *points at JoMan and Chris Zero*, however that man still breathes, he isn't wounded as the other two. *points at Ymmot* It looks like all of them were infected from some kind of bite.. It will be dangerous to keep them on town.

    Jiggmin: Bullshit! Plagues and all that shit are fake! If that man survives he will be sent back to his place!

    ColdFire: Fine, it will be more safe for us.

    13TH DECEMBER 2012 2:00 AM

    *Jiggmin, after a long night, visits Ymmot on the hospital, he was very nervous*

    Jiggmin: Hello, man. Your name's Ymmot, right?

    ColdFire: He is sleeping you idiot *facepalms*, but he told us earlier that something attacked them in their town, something big and vicious. The bite was poisonous and carries infections, but we successfully removed the poison from this guy, the other 2 may rest in peace.

    Jiggmin: Okay, and if you dare to call me an idiot again you will be sent to prison, so careful with your words, boy.

    ColdFire: *whispers* Dictator...
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    PART 2: THE PREPARATION

    Jacob comes out and calls his trustworthy staff.

    Jiggmin: Hello? Tony, Zach, do you hear me?

    Tony: We do, Jacob.

    Zach: What do you want?!?

    Jiggmin: Hey, take it easy. The Legendary Trio came back from the Library of the Ancients, 2 of them are dead already. I want you to investigate the land.

    Zach: Pffft, fine, but you owe me my lunch!

    Tony: Don't listen at him, he is a bit.... drunk. We will do as you want, but we will have to take 2 volunteers, 4 heads are better than 2, right?

    Jiggmin: Okay, I guess.

    *1 hour later*

    Tony: Hey you, what's your name?

    Mysterious Man: Zorjeff, why?

    Zach: Can you give me your credit card?

    Tony: For ****s sake Zach, will you stop drinking vodka?

    Zorjeff: No, but I can give you some juice.

    Zach: That will make it.

    Tony: *facepalm*... we are so screwed.

    Tony: Listen, we have got a mission to do, do you want to assist us in our mission?

    Zorjeff: ok

    Tony: Anyways, we gotta find the other guy.

    Zach: As you wish. *farts*

    Zorjeff: You disgusting piece of shit! Give me back my juice!

    *5 minutes later of searching*

    Zach: Hey you, guy thinking that he's a pirate! What's your name!

    Pirate Guy: GET AWAY YOU PEDOPHILES! I WONT GIVE YOU MY NAME!

    Tony: Whoah, relax, Gandhi, we just ask you to serve us on a mission.

    Pirate Guy: Fine, my name is Proclifo.

    Jiggmin *on phone*: Hey, Zach, Tony! Did you find them yet?

    Tony: Yes, both of them.

    Jiggmin *on phone*: Come visit my house then. *closes phone*

    *Some minutes later, on Jacob's house*

    Jiggmin: May I ask who are they?

    Zach: This is Zorjeff and this is Proclifo.

    Proclifo: Oh god, the king! That must be a fabulous mission, isn't it?

    Jiggmin: Yeah, something like that.


    Jacob explains Zorjeff and Proclifo about the mission and the Library of the Ancients, meanwhile Tony and Zach examine the map that Jacob gave them.


    Tony: So, we must cross a section of the Artistry Ochard, the Castle in the sky...

    Zach: WAIT WHAT? What do you mean "A section of the Artistry Ochard"? Isn't just a whole itself?

    Tony: No, there are random parts of the Artistry Ochard around the country, each containing about 2-5 houses.

    Zach: Okay, go on.

    Tony: The Castle in the sky leads us to 4 roads, Jiggmin's games, Sony, Microsoft and Nintendo, regardless on what we pick, there will be always a path to the Library of the Ancients.

    Zach: Cool.

    *Proclifo and Zorjeff come in*

    Zorjeff: Jacob explained us all of this. Holy crap guys, are you his secretaries or something?

    Zach: Nah, just his... staff.

    Proclifo: So, when do we start?

    Tony: Tomorrow, we should take some good sleep first.

    PART 3 COMING SOON
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    PART 3: THE BEGINNING

    14TH DECEMBER 2012, 1:00 AM

    Proclifo: So, are we all ready?

    Tony: Yes, let's go.

    Jiggmin *walkie talkie*: In some minutes you should be in the 5th sector of the Artistry Ochard

    Zach: We know, me and Tony examined the map you gave us.

    Jiggmin *walkie talkie*: Good, but be careful, that area isn't very safe at night. *closes walkie talkie*

    Zorjeff: What the **** is this shit? Minecraft?

    Zach: Zorjeff, shut the hell up and keep walking..

    Zorjeff: As you say mom.


    *5 minutes later of walking*

    Tony: We are finally here! That place is so small, I wonder why it is called a sector

    Zorjeff: Ow, its already night, we better find shelter before creepers blow us up *ironic laugh*

    Zach: Man, I am already tired of you, another ****ing joke and you will be dead. I swear.

    Zorjeff: Who do you think you are? A cop? You cannot kill me, kid.

    Proclifo: Hey Zorjeff, Zach is right, you better shut the hell up if you want to survive.

    Zorjeff: Whatever...

    The team takes a breath after the arguement Zorjeff and Zach had.

    Tony: Guys, look at this house, it looks modern and it has lights. We should ask whoever lives in here to let us take some food, I am hungry as hell.

    Zach: No, we shall break the door open and rob the hell out of him.

    Proclifo: That's not really nice...

    Zach: I don't care whats nice or not! You want to survive? Take food. You do not to survive? Stay outside and look at me getting all that food and money for myself.

    Tony: Man, calm the hell down, you do not even know if he is going to let us take food or not.

    Zorjeff: We shall see...

    *Tony Knocks the door*

    Mysterious man: Who is it?

    Tony: Hello, sir? We just want a place to live, and most of all we want food.

    Mysterious Man: May I ask your names, young fellas?

    Zach: We can ask you the same thing, old man.

    Mysterious Man: If you want to stay in here you better tell me your names or else you will get cooked in my slaughter house. Young people these days. Full of ego in their brains, horrible.

    Zach: Fine, I am Zach, this is my buddy Tony and these two are Proclifo and Zorjeff.

    Mysterious Man: Come in, my name is Rammjet.

    Proclifo: So, where is the kitchen? I am hungry as a wolf.

    Rammjet: It's upstairs, next to my brother's bedroom. That's where you will sleep, if he lets you, though.

    Tony: Allright, let's go.

    Rammjet: Here it is. Let me just to open the door... gaaah!

    Zorjeff: What is happening? Why are you screaming?

    Rammjet: It's locked! You got to find my brother, he ran into the woods with his girlfriend tonight, he is a pickle.

    Zach: Why don't you go search him yourself, old man?

    Rammjet: If you want me to let you sleep and eat in here, you better find him, or else, you will have to deal with the naked nature yerself.

    *10 minutes laters, after searching into the woods*

    Zorjeff: I hear something, stay still, maybe it won't notice us.

    Tony: What is it?

    Zorjeff: It's something green, just don't speak goddammit!

    Proclifo: Mhmmm, haha, is that your girl?

    Zach: What the hell are you even talking about, dude..

    Proclifo: Look at that thing! It's a freakin pickle with his pickle girlfriend! The exact description the old gentleman told us! It must be him...

    Tony: It is him. Look, the keys are hanging out of his pocket.

    Zorjeff: The only thing I have to do now is kill them, so we can get the keys. Him or us.

    Proclifo: Do it.

    Zach: NOO! You idiot! It will attract noises and whatever the hell lives here is gonna kill all of us!

    Zorjeff: Just stop being sissy, for once. I pull the trigger in 3, 2.. *LOUD NOISES AND GRAWLS*

    Tony: OH MY ****ING LORD! They got slaughtered by that wolf!

    Proclifo: It wasn't a wolf, it was something bigger, bigger than a lion...

    Zorjeff: Who cares what was it? Let's just grab the keys and get the hell outta here.

    *Back in the house*

    Zach: Hey, Rammjet, we got your keys.

    Rammjet: Fantastic! Did you find my brother?

    Zach: Ermm... about this...

    Rammjet: What? Is he dead!? ANSWER ME

    Tony: Sadly, yes, we are so sorry for your brother...

    Rammjet: You monsters! You killed him so you could get the keys!

    Zorjeff: Relax! Your brother..

    Rammjet: GET THE **** OUT OF HERE AND NEVER COME BACK. *pushes all of them outside and closes the door*

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    PART 3: SOME ACTION

    Zorjeff: It's all your fault Zach!

    Zach: How is it my fault?

    Zorjeff: You told him that his brother was dead, thus letting him believe that we killed him!

    Zach: Can you stop always assuming things? You are too much of a pain in the anal, Zor.

    Tony: Stop arg..

    Zorjeff: Do NOT INTERFERE!

    Tony: Don't you understand? It's always between you two, you always argue over pointless things!

    Zorjeff: Pointless things? Are you ****ing retarded? It's our survival! Now if Zach didn't **** this up we would be sleeping and we wouldn't be hungry! I regret for joining you in the first place, you two are two guilible hypocrites who do not know what SURVIVAL IS!

    Proclifo: You know what? If you hate us, just get the **** out of the group, you don't do anything but bring troubles and discord.

    Zorjeff: You idiots! You will get us all killed! Now, let's keep moving in the forest...

    *half an hour of walking in the forest *

    Proclifo: Holy shit! That was a long- *gets shooted in the head*

    Tony: WHAT THE ****!? PROCLIFO!

    Zach: Who the hell are you? What do you want from US!?

    Voice: You thought I was dead, right?

    Zorjeff: What are you talking about?

    Voice: You thought I was dead and you thought it would be cool TO ROB ME AND STEAL MY KEYS, RIGHT?

    Zorjeff: Oh ****, it's that pickle we saw yesterday. But you and your... girlfriend got teared apart! How the bloody hell aren't you dead?

    Mysterious Pickle: PooZy HAS NERVES OF STEEL! And now, your friend is dead. And next is you, tall guy with the car shirt.

    Zach: Tony, I think he means you...

    Tony: Thank you for the useful information, captain obvious.

    Zorjeff: Hmm, so your name is PooZy, right? Then you better like this rock shoved up your ass! *throws rock at his face*

    Zorjeff: RUN! Tony Zach!

    PooZy: *screams in pain* You will pay that, you son of a *****! *starts shooting*

    Now the following moments are exciting action scenes, with Zor, Tony and Zach running while they are being shooted by PooZy.

    Zach: Hah, that guy has terrible aim!

    Tony: Lucky us, I guess.

    Zorjeff: You two, shut up, let's hide on this cave.

    *Gets on the cave*

    Zorjeff: Should we eat Proclifo's dead body? He might have a wonderful human rotten flesh.

    Zach: Oh, shut up. Cannibalism is not the answer!

    Zorjeff: Don't make me start again, please.

    Tony: Zorjeff, just stop. We will find food soon, I promise you!

    *Random walking sounds in the cave*

    PooZy: Where are you, mother ****ers! I know you are here!

    Zorjeff: *Whispers* Tony, give me your gun. *tony gives gun*

    Zorjeff: GET SOME OF THIS! *shoots PooZy*

    PooZy, now almost helpless, screams in fear and pain while he is trying to grab his gun.

    Zach: Not so fast. *kicks away gun*

    Tony: What's your last words, satanic pickle?

    PooZy: My middle *coughs* finger is itching, assholes. *coughs loud* You shall be be blessed *coughs* by god... *final cough and breath*

    Tony: I thought he was a satanist...

    Zach: Screw him, let's keep going. He delayed us too much.

    *10 minutes later*

    Zorjeff: Oh my god! This thing is really floating.

    Zach: That's why it is called "Castle in the sky"...

    PART 5 COMING SOON
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    last reserve (probably)

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    looong story
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    funny how the should I make a story thread got more replies than this lol

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    madick, reserved, dr

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heliοn View Post
    funny how the should I make a story thread got more replies than this lol
    Heh, give it a while. Anyway, awesome so far!

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    Yeah, seems good.
    Try my luna campaign entry.

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    I will do part 2 in a while

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    is it okay if i post a vocaroo narrating this? :3
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    Quote Originally Posted by ZiLLiAN View Post
    is it okay if i post a vocaroo narrating this? :3
    yes c:

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    Nice! I really like it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Heliοn View Post
    yes c:
    http://vocaroo.com/i/s0cnJQxru0k7

    edit: i forgot to plug-in my mic ._.
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    What am i..

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZiLLiAN View Post
    roflrofl do more please

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    Quote Originally Posted by ZiLLiAN View Post
    Are you going to record all the chapters :3?

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