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Thread: Struck By Silence (A JV Story)

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    Crapping rainbows, yay. smash619's Avatar
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    awww man, this is awesome, can I be in it plz, :3

    I'll love you forever and ever...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Sniper-Man View Post
    Transexual?
    Mayb.

    *bats eyelashes*

    Sorry, no.

  4. #264
    If you're not going to finish the story, request a lock and start a new one. No use discussing a story that won't be updated.
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  6. #265
    Quote Originally Posted by Gοd View Post
    If you're not going to finish the story, request a lock and start a new one. No use discussing a story that won't be updated.
    I'll wait a bit. I may continue it.

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    Yes I read this while I was banned and I applaud.

    Bravo

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    This is called a bump.

    I'm rewriting the story, the new first chapter will probably have little resemblance to the current first chapter, and this will go with chapter 2.

    I feel as if I need to focus more on the main characters, rather than the secondary characters, and I have little inspiration to continue off of my current setup.

    The chapters will be quite short, since I feel that long chapters drain a lot of ideas from me...

    I will leave my other chapters as is since there is some artwork that goes along with it that probably wouldnt go along with the new version, and I'll just post the new version later in the thread, or start a new one...

    (I may not post the remake at all, it depends)

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    Make moar!

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    I have an obsession with girls?

    irl i'm non sexual
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  14. #271
    Quote Originally Posted by PooZy View Post
    I have an obsession with girls?

    irl i'm non sexual
    When I was a noob, something made me think (I think an OT discussion in the JV Comics thread) otherwise.

    Don't worry, I got a lot of the personalities wrong....

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    You actually got mine quite right. (Other than due to the fact I've never called anime "Bub". But that's really a minor detail.)

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  17. #273
    Let us make it an e-book!!
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    'Mate, we're going to change the world, the people, the law. Friend, we're going to change the rules.'

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jake the Ripper View Post
    Classic! I was captivated during the whole read. A phenomenal depiction of what JV could be like if it were indeed a physical community. The characters stood out amazingly and the events all lead up to that one cliffhanger that has you craving for more. I think you would make a fine author, webbi. You should try out short stories and post some on JV. I'm sorry to hear about your writer's block - usually keeping a diary gets you over it eventually. You just need to write, write, write.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jake the Ripper View Post
    Classic! I was captivated during the whole read. A phenomenal depiction of what JV could be like if it were indeed a physical community. The characters stood out amazingly and the events all lead up to that one cliffhanger that has you craving for more. I think you would make a fine author, webbi. You should try out short stories and post some on JV. I'm sorry to hear about your writer's block - usually keeping a diary gets you over it eventually. You just need to write, write, write.
    mockingjay, as frustrated as i am with your constant account making, i am shocked by your massive vocabulary, and i find it extremely difficult to believe you are 11
    just thought i'd say that.

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  22. #276
    I'm going to lock this on request of Webbi now, seeing as she doesn't think she will continue it. It will be unlocked if she ever decides to, though!

    Current best time on Rubik's 3x3 Cube: 28.55 seconds

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    In after the lock

    Also, I have an update, although it's pretty short. I'm trying to get back in the groove....

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    If you read this VM me :3 Member Z's Avatar
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    Oh you're going to continue? I actually saw this a few months ago, it was fun to read how someone can see others and write how they think a person will act.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ω-Z View Post
    Oh you're going to continue? I actually saw this a few months ago, it was fun to read how someone can see others and write how they think a person will act.
    I've found it very interesting how my opinions of people have changed since I last updated.

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    My views on some of the characters are completely different than they were.

    An example, in the past I thought of Akan being a hero, now I feel much more comfortable giving her a villainistic role.
    Last edited by doubleth!nk; 27th December 2012 at 10:23 PM.

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