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    Default Struck By Silence (A JV Story)

    I posted a preview of this story in my blog, and it got pretty positive reviews, and somebody suggested I make a thread, so here I am!

    http://jiggmin.com/entries/54619-Str...und-a-name!%29

    Quote Originally Posted by fastfoodcac1 View Post


    Written by: webbi2012
    Illustrations by: *Princess*, JENNiFER, Pin drop Silence/The Silent Artist, fastfoodcac1 and whoever else
    This Intro Thingie Written By: Mars

    Inspired by the events of the Jiggmin Villagers.


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    ~Chapter 1~

    “Happy Hour in Andres!”, a voice called out in the Village Center. The voice was instantly smothered by cheering and talking and the other noises of the bustling town. People were heading towards the PR2 Stadium, for their chance at getting their racing ranks up and winning cool prizes.

    Platform Racing was the Village's biggest thing. If Jiggmin's Village was a country, it would definitely be the national sport. There were three Platform Racing districts, each with different zones and tracks. Those zones are open depending on the time, and how many racers are around.

    The PR1 district was obsolete, a wasteland of sorts. It used to be a popular race spot, and it was the first district constructed. Now it was overrun by thugs and trolls, and the occasional nostalgic oldies who would show up for the memories.

    The PR3 district was looking to be a promising district, with the latest technology, and many new cool tracks. But mid construction, The Great Administrator Jiggmin ran out of funds, and couldn't continue. The Administrator of the neighboring city of Sparkworkz, a slimy fellow named inXile, offered to supply the rest of the funds as long as the district was owned by his city. Jiggmin only agreed because he really had no choice. The district was completed, and everybody was satisfied with the game. Well, for a little while. Then, suddenly the district was plagued with every issue in the book. People left, and it was realized the Jiggy was ultimately ripped off.

    The PR2 district was by far the best district, and the one with the most longevity. Although it wasn't as fancy as PR3, it was probably the most reliable district for quality racing. There will always be thugs, trolls, cheaters and the occasional illegal actions, such as spamming and cussing, but the issues were almost always resolved, and many people were still doing what Platform Racing was all about.

    Having fun.

    And as a reward for keeping PR2 the best place in the world for Platform Racing, The Great Admin created Happy Hours. Happy Hour was an certain hour in any point of the day where all Platform Racers got more Experience for their races and had the chance to win exclusive prizes.

    And so, many of the townspeople were heading towards the PR2 zone Andres for a certain Happy Hour. One of those people was Pin Drop Silence, better known as the Silent Artist. She was a very quiet person who was relatively shy. She followed a crowd of villagers, most of whom she already known.

    Quote Originally Posted by Lighte<3 View Post
    The older woman with short black hair, brown eyes, and black squareish glasses was known as Akan. She was a pretty cool, outgoing chick who was friends with almost the whole Village. Walking beside her, talking, was Jennifer...erm, JENNiFER.... a younger girl with long brown hair and greyish-green eyes. Behind them was Zach77, some noob, and the brown haired PooZy, one of the legendary citizens of the Village, who had an obsession with pickles.

    The Artist walked in between Zach and PooZ. They glanced at her.

    “Hello Silent”, PooZ grinned, cockily.

    “Hello”, Zach said.

    Pin Drop smiled at them, and started listening in to Akan and Jen's conversation, which was somewhat interesting.

    “Ha. Isn't V your boyfriend?”, Akan asked, fairly sarcastically. Jen snorted in disgust.

    “Are you kidding me?! He hates my guts!”.

    Akan put her arm around the younger girl's shoulders, with a look of satisfaction on her face.

    “That's my girl. I thought you were turning to the dark side for a bit there!”, she patted Jen's shoulder.

    “And Darth V4V says: JENNiFER, I am your father!', Jen replied, nasally. They both bent over, laughing. Silent grinned, as if she was about to laugh.

    “That would be disturbing”, PooZy muttered, snickering. Zach spoke up.

    “VforVendetta has been acting really weird lately, like he's been possessed or something.”.

    “Maybe that's for the better!”, Akan said, grinning.

    “Why should we believe Zach. He's a trolling noob.”, Jen spat. Zach glared at her.

    “Shut up...”, he growled.

    “Calm down”, PooZ said to Zach.

    Another sound, almost like white noise, was heard in the background. The Silent Artist tuned out of the conversation that was being held in the group, and looked around. The sweet smell of the Cactus Forest, which was bordering the Village and the PR2 District, flooded her nose for a moment. The smell began to fade as sunlight began to shine through the pointy foliage, marking the end of the Forest and the beginning of the District. The noise began to get louder and clearer as the group ventured further into the district. The sound was of people cheering, conversing and racing, and it became almost deafening as they approached the Andres zone, which was usually odd, since nobody really raced in the zone. Unless it was Happy Hour.

    The Artist stopped walking, and looked around as the rest of her group registered into the zone. There was a rich diversity of people, from rank 0 newbies to the legendary rank 50s. There was quite a few mods scouring the premises, mostly talking with the other racers and racing themselves.

    Preoccupied with observing her surroundings, Pin Drop literally jumped when she felt someone tap her on the shoulder. She spun around to meet...

    The Great Administrator, Jiggmin.

    “Howdy, do you know where the Andres zone is?”, he asked, with a clueless look on his face. Pin Drop blushed, her cheeks bright red. She pointed at the ground and nodded.

    “Huh...”, Jiggy took a closer look. “Oh, so I'm in the Andres zone....Thanks!”, he ran off, leaving the Silent Artist flustered with the encounter.

    “Silent, hurry up. You're falling quite far behind!", PooZy's voice shook the Artist out of a fantasy. She darted up to the registration booth, where Akan, Jen, PooZ and Zach were waiting.

    “Man, you look like you saw Jiggmin!”, Zach said. The Artist stared at him, with her signature silent look.

    “Let's take a ride on the Newby Train! Toot Toot!”, Akan supplied, laughing.

    “Sure”, Zach grinned.

    “Why not?”, PooZ shrugged.

    The Silent Artist nodded.

    “I'll wait for you guys when you finish”, Jen said.

    “Alrighty, let's go”, Akan said, as the four headed toward the Newby Train track. Jen walked over to a bench and sat down. She pulled out her phone, and started texting a friend. She failed to notice somebody's creepy shadow lurking over her.

    “Hello.... Jennifer”, a bitter, arid voice hissed. Before she could move out of the way, the sickening sound of the ban hammer colliding with her body echoed throughout Andres. The demented mod....or was it an admin?, had already slithered away, by the time somebody came to aid the banned racer. The big question was why? Jen never did anything, except for sit on a bench.

    Moments later, a message flashed on the screen of the large monitor that was placed on the front of the registration building, like a billboard. The message said:

    VforVendetta has banned JENNiFER for 66667 seconds. Reason: Why not?.



    If you like it, I'll continue it. If you don't like it....well, too bad, I'm continuing it
    Last edited by doubleth!nk; 27th December 2012 at 11:07 AM.
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back


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    ~Chapter 2~

    “I can't believe you let the Silent Artist win!”, Akan said, with a hint of disgust

    “Meh, I've won this track a million times....” PooZy shrugged.

    Akan and PooZ walked out the Newby Train exit gates, alongside Zach77 and the Silent Artist. Zach's head was hung low, and was he mumbling to himself while Silent was admiring the Santa Hat she won. Silent suddenly stopped at the bench that JENNiFER was sitting at earlier. It was empty. She pointed at the bench and looked at the rest of the group in confusion..

    “You can sit there, nobody's stopping you...”, Zach said, shrugging. The Artist shook her head.

    “Uhh, the evil bench monster tried to eat you?”, PooZy said. The Artist, Akan and Zach shot him a death glare.

    “Hey! It could've happened!”, he stepped back, forcing a grin.

    “Keep it up, Pickleboy! You're acting like Walker9!”, Akan snapped. Zach rolled his eyes, and a frustrated Silent Artist picked a stick up off the ground and started sketching something in the thin layer of sand surrounding the bench.

    “Hey! TSA is drawing something...”, Zach noticed, looking over Pin drop's shoulder. She drew a detailed face, and it looked awfully familiar.

    “Jennifer! Wasn't she waiting for us right here?”, PooZy exclaimed, in a eureka moment. Pin drop breathed a sigh of semi-relief and nodded.

    Zach suddenly ran up to some guy who was standing at the nearby registration building.

    “Have you seen Jennifer?”, he asked.

    ThePro1998 shook his head.

    “Sorry bro, I just got here. She probably just ditched you. I'll keep my eyes open though...”.

    “Thanks!”, Zach ran back to the group.
    “JEN!”, Akan shouted, wandering away from the Newby Train entrance. Zach walked up to PooZ and shook his head.

    “No luck”.

    PooZy chuckled and ruffled the younger boy's hair.

    “Stand back and let the master show you how it's done”, he strutted up to somebody, with Zach in tow. The Silent Artist rolled her eyes and started looking around on her own, while Zach and PooZy approached Joltghonz, or N e R.

    “Hey Joltghonz”. PooZ said casually, shaking hands with N e R. Zach watched intently.

    “What's up?”, N e R asked.

    “Have you seen JENNiFER?”.

    “No...” Joltz paused for a moment. “Actually yeah. I read on the Ban Board that she was banned by V4V. I can't remember how long for though...”, he chuckled.

    “What!”, Zach and PooZ said in unison.

    “V has been banning people for the stupidest reasons lately. Yesterday he banned someone for having a Retarded Nickname....”.

    ~

    Quote Originally Posted by JENNiFER View Post


    JENNiFER sat in a small plastic green chair in the middle of a small, plain white room. Her arms were handcuffed behind the chair, and light was streaming into the dark room through barred windows. There was a door that was opened a crack. Voices were heard, coming from behind it.

    “A permaban? I wonder what Jen did...”, a female voice said.

    “Nothing”, a male voice replied.

    “Nothing?! What do you mean!”.

    “According to V4V, he did it because 'he can'.”.

    “V's acting VERY weird lately. First the Nickname ban, now the Because I Can ban! To make matters worse, he isn't even taking charge of his bans. He's just banning people and leaving them where they stand, to get picked up by some other moderator!”, the female voice said, agitated.

    “Well, I wouldn’t be surprised if Jen got on V's bad side....but I don't see why she was permabanned. She barely has any priors.”.

    “She could've done something really bad, like hacking”.

    “Trust me”, the male voice said, reassuringly. “We would know if she did”.

    “Let's just interrogate her, A”.

    “Since when were you allowed to boss me around, Anime?”.

    The door creaked as it opened. A man and a woman walked out and up to JENNiFER. Jen looked up. She recognized the man, and she knew him very well. The woman? No so much. Still, she knew who they both were.

    aaaaaa123456789 and animebubble. Or two PR2 District moderators.

    Ax6 looked at Jen.

    “What did you do, JENNiFER?”, he said sternly.

    “I did NOTHING!”, Jen sputtered. “I was freaking texting my friends and out comes VforPsychopath, assaulting me with his darn hammer! That man should get...”.

    “Sssh, calm down”, Animebubble said, softly. “Okay...but did you do something to aggravate him?”.

    Jen shook her head. “Nothing”.

    “Odd...”, Bub mumbled.

    “Nothing at all?”, Ax6 asked, expecting a better answered.

    Jen looked down.

    “Well, I sorta sent him a death threat last week....”, she sighed.

    “Well that could do it...”, Bub said to Ax6. He shook his head.

    “V isn’t the type to go crazy, even if he's being stalked by a homicidal psycho....”.

    “I HEARD THAT!”, Jen yelled. “I'm NOT a psycho! I was just really butthurt at him for breaking up with me, okay?!”.

    “So...V started it?”, Bub asked.

    Jen nodded.

    “I doubt she did anything...Let's just let her go on a warning...”, Bub said to ax6.

    “Okay, Jen. We've decided that your ban is unfair, and that we will discuss with V or Jiggmin....”, Ax6 announced. Anime unlocked the cuffs off Jen's arms. She stood up, shaking her aching arms.

    “Thanks”, she smiled, walking toward the opened door.

    “Wait a sec....”, Ax6 suddenly said. “Can you take us to where you last saw V?”.

    Jen spun around.

    “Okay...”.

    ~

    VforVendetta stood outside the Interrogation Hut. One of the windows were opened a crack, and he heard everything. He grinned. His plan was playing out perfectly.

    “Hey! V”, a little boy ran up to him. He was wearing a My Little Pony: Frendship Is Magic T-Shirt and his hair looked like....Noodles. V turned around.

    “I found Jiggmin! He's over there!”, the boy pointed at a small crowd near the Mario Bros track.

    “Good, Icy”, V and Ice walked out from the shadows, and towards the Administrator. They pushed aside the group of people, and V walked up next to Jiggy.

    “Hey, can you meet me at the Isabel ruins for a moment?”, he asked.

    The Isabel Zone was an old zone that was retired due to the fact that barely anybody showed up there near the time it was abandoned. It was famous for being the zone associated with the “UAX Disaster”, when a popular community member, UnknownAX used the Keylogger, a legendary weapon that can give you a person's deepest secrets, to capture former super moderator Melanie's special Password. If a person get's ahold of somebody else's Password, that person can possess the other person's body and soul. As you can guess, UAX caused total mayhem when he possessed Mel's Password.

    Jiggy looked at V.

    “Why? Is it urgent, or are you pulling a UAX?”, he scoffed.

    V shook his head.

    “It's incredibly urgent, and I figured we should speak somewhere private”.

    Jiggmin eyed him cautiously.

    “Maybe later...”, suddenly V gripped his left hand.

    “You have no choice”, he hissed in Jiggy's ear. Ice Lord gripped the Administrator's right hand.

    “Be right back!”, Jiggmin yelled to the crowd, before he walked with V and Icy, or rather dragged by V and Icy towards the Isabel Ruins.

    ~

    “I was sitting right here....”, JENNiFER, Ax6, and Bubble walked up to the bench that Jen was sitting at earlier. Ax6 started inspecting the bench and it's surroundings.

    “There's some footprints on the sand that's pointing back towards the Interrogation Hut....”, he mumbled.

    “Hey, a picture....It looks like you...”, Anime pointed to the sketch Pin drop drew earlier. There was a footprint obstucting some of the face.

    “It looks like Silent drew it....”, Jen looked closer. “It's me.....she...they must be looking for me....”.

    “Who?”, Ax6 asked.

    “Silent, Akan, PooZy and some noob who's name I can't remember....Zach...yea, that's it....”, Jen replied.

    “Well, we need to find V first, one of your friends will probably see us on the way...”, Bub said. Jen nodded, following Bub and A in the direction of the footprints.

    ~

    VforVendetta pushed Jiggmin into the wall separating the Isabel Ruins from the rest of the PR2 District with excessive force. His head snapped back against the wall, and he let out a shrill yelp, collapsing onto the ground below.

    “You know I can easily strip you of your status....”, he snarled, looking up at the deranged smod.

    “Try”, V shrugged. Ice Lord, who had seemed to revert to his Noodlez personality gave Jiggy a sharp slap in the face, causing him to snarl. Before he could get up though, V and Noodlez firmly grasped his wrists again and dragged him into the Ruins.

    ~

    Ax6, Jen, and Bubble walked up towards the Mario Bros track, a split second after VforVendetta and Ice Lord/Noodlez took off with Jiggmin. The crowd was starting to split up, and many people were talking about the event that just transpired. They were mostly talking about Purr Cot, UAX, and the likes, but a few levelheaded people were thinking of much more boring things, like mod meetings.

    “What's with the crowd?”, Bub said, squeezing through some people.

    “It's what we're looking for. Big crowds equals big people, and big people equal smods or The Great Administrator.”, Ax6 said, walking ahead.

    “True...Hey! Akan!”, Jen caught notice of one of the members of the group she was with earlier. Akan twisted around at the sound of Jen's voice and ran up to them.

    “Jen! We were looking all over for you!”, she said. She noticed the two mods that accompanied Jen.

    “Hey Ax6, hey Anime...”, she shook A and Bub's hands. “What happened?”.

    “V banned me for no reason other than to up his enormous ego....”, Jen scoffed.

    “No flaming, Jen”, Ax6 warned. He looked at Akan. “What is up with the crowd?”.

    Akan shrugged. “Something about V4V and Jiggmin. I don't know what exactly happened”, she said before walking away.

    “Ugh, we missed them....”, Bub sighed.

    ~

    The Silent Artist stumbled out of the overgrown bush on the outskirts of the Isabel Ruins. She had already searched every nook and cranny of the Andres zone, and she was exhausted. She collapsed, literally hugging the grass. Suddenly the sound of voices make her look up, in curiosity. She staggered to her feet, and ran towards where the voices seemed to be coming from. She stopped at the Isabel wall, but the voices were coming from inside. So she ran around, finding a rusty iron gate. It was locked, but there was square shaped holes that were big enough for Silent to look through. She peered through a hole, and she was met with shock.

    Inside the ruins, VforVendetta, and a young boy with noodle hair were nonchalantly standing over a seemingly knocked out Jiggmin. V seemed to order noodle boy to get something, and he dashed out of sight. A few seconds later, a hooded figure walked out with some sort of blade in a wide, bulky sheath. The figure passed it to V.

    “Thanks A”, V said, audible enough for Silent to hear. He lifted the sheath up a bit, and took hold of it's hilt. He grinned an evil grin and slowly took the blade out from it, and then lifted it high in the air.

    Quote Originally Posted by Pin drop Silence View Post
    It looked like....an oversized key.

    Silent stumbled back in shock when she realized what it was.

    Such a powerful, legendary weapon.

    The Keylogger.

    Last edited by doubleth!nk; 27th December 2012 at 11:16 AM. Reason: UPDATED
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    ~Chapter 3~


    V paused for a second, with his ear pointed in the direction Silent was.

    "Somebody's here", he said, emotionless.

    Silent scrambled to her feet when she noticed they were on to her. She dashed into the outlying woods.

    "Noodles, find the intruder", V stated, in the same bland voice as before. Noodles grinned.

    "No problem Vfor", he said before running toward the gate. It was incredibly odd seeing the Noodle persona following orders. He had a bit of an anti-mod view. There was some thing about Vendetta's sudden change in personality that Noodles liked quite a bit.

    He reached the gate and tried to yank it open. But he didn't succeed. The rust caked on from years of weathering made the gates susceptible to getting....stuck.

    "It wont budge, damn", he growled. He stared at the gates for a moment, suddenly getting an idea. He wedged his foot in one of the square holes and climbed up the gates. When he reached the top, he peered out into the woods. When he caught view of the Silent Artist, he scrambled down the other side of the gates.

    Silent paused for a moment to catch her breath. The air was full of moisture from the surrounding vegetation, making it hard to breathe. She peered in the direction she had come from, and saw a figure catching up to her. She quickly darted to the side, trying to lose her pursuer.

    "I'm rubber, you're glue, whatever you do bounces off of me and comes back at....you", Noodles grinned, running in the direction Silent had just went in.

    The deeper they ran into the woods, the darker and denser it got. It had gotten to the point that the pursued and the pursuer had less than a vague idea of where they were.

    Noodles froze. The second pair of footsteps ceased to be audible, and his surroundings ceased to be viewable.

    "Shit, I lost her....Where the heck am I?", he muttered.

    Silent kept running blindly. It was indeed surprising that she hadn't ran facefirst into a tree yet.

    Suddenly she felt one of her feet getting caught in some roots. In a split-second, her body tumbled to the forest floor.

    THWAAACK.

    ~

    "Hey, where did Silent go? I haven't seen her since we split up to look for Jen...", PooZy noted.

    "Don't tell me you've lost another person...", Ax6 laughed
    .
    PooZy, JENNiFER, animebubble and aaaaaa123456789 were still hanging around the Andres server. Ax6 and anime had switched mod duties with some other mods, and were using the free time to hang out and race along with the others. It wasn't until this point that they had noticed Silent was still gone.

    "We should go look for...", a blast of static erupted from the zone-wide sound system, interrupting PooZy. Everybody in view froze to hear the message.

    "Good evening, Platform Racers", The voice of the Great Administrator boomed from the surround sound speakers mounted throughout the zone. Something was off about Jiggmin's voice. It was awfully monotone.

    "In ten minutes time, I will be closing this Zone for maintenance. Everybody must be cleared from here before that time. Sorry for the inconvenience.". A click was heard as Jiggmin put the microphone down.

    "Well, we don't have time to search the place. She's probably back in the Village", ax6 said. "I can give you guys a lift, my car in in the parking lot". He pulled a set of keys out from his pocket.

    "If there's air conditioning, I'm in", Jen said, wiping the sweat off her forehead.

    "I don't understand why Jiggmin has to do an update now", Zach spoke up. The others peered at him.

    "I completely forgot you were here", PooZy stated. The others nodded in agreement. Zach rolled his eyes in annoyance.

    "Well, we're running out of time....", aaa started walking towards the parking lot, which was on the left side of the Newby Train track. Anime, Jen, PooZ and Zach followed him.

    ~

    Silent slowly opened her eyes, her head was violently throbbing and her line of sight was incredibly hazy. As her senses started clearing up, she noticed she was in a temple. She was surrounded in greyish stone (Most likely was marble), with carvings and plants growing out of every nook and cranny. She could hear the soothing sound of water close by. She attempted to prop herself up, but the mixture of the cold stone and her throbbing head deemed it improbable.

    "Do you want some help?", a whispery voice suddenly flooded her ears.
    Last edited by doubleth!nk; 27th December 2012 at 12:54 PM. Reason: Update
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    100% support for webbi2012!
    Thanks for Crown Divine Striker and Dry Bowser45
    Proud member of XPA!'s army.

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    I didn't read this, but I can tell it's awesome.

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    *I-totally-got-ninja'd-but-im-still-reserving-dis-bump*
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    Quote Originally Posted by webbi2012 View Post
    *I-totally-got-ninja'd-but-im-still-reserving-dis-bump*
    If you need me to remove my post, just let me know
    Thanks for Crown Divine Striker and Dry Bowser45
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    Lol, nice story. I like the cliffhanger at the end of the chapter.

    Good job!
    PONT ~ PINKY ~ PAT ~ AX6 ~ RED ~ DARKE (come back soon) ~ ATOMIC CAT ~ TBBM ~

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    It's entertaining, the characters don't seem like themselves too much though.
    I made it myself
    I'll work on it again soon I promise

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ross View Post
    It's entertaining, the characters don't seem like themselves too much though.
    Yeah, I'm trying though. It's hard to be precise when the characters are indeed actual people....
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    Quote Originally Posted by N e R View Post
    Needs more Joltghonz in it.
    Chapter 2, featuring Joltghonz/N e R!

    Sounds good...
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    Quote Originally Posted by webbi2012 View Post
    Chapter 2, featuring Joltghonz/N e R!

    Sounds good...
    Indubitably

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  28. #15
    The first few chapters are buildup. The action comes later...hehehe....
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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  30. #16
    I actually read it now. I remember the last time I wrote a story about JV. I made fun of people...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Venison Sucks View Post
    I actually read it now. I remember the last time I wrote a story about JV. I made fun of people...
    Yeah, a lot of people tend to post parodies

    I personally think they are funny, but I find I'm better at writing adventure stories...
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    Its a good story butt L0L it need me (- -)" - "
    Anti-Hitler

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ninja Jew View Post
    Its a good story butt L0L it need me (- -)" - "
    You spelled but wrong....
    It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
    And then she made my lips hurt
    I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
    Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back

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    I know $ - $
    Anti-Hitler

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