Spontus (A story in the making)

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 04:56 PM

Ok, so here's the official Thread for the story I am and have been working on, Spontus. It's set in the future, somewhat, and the world is in new reign by animals. The story follows Ross, the protagonist, with strange powers. The story starts in the Nation "Syrene"(Credit Me) and it's capital, "Hythe"(Crappy name, unfortunately credit me)
(Red = Orginal; Green = Revision; Coming soon means I will fix the link when I get off my lazy butt, and if you can't figure "In progress" out, get some help.)
Chapter Pastebin Links:
Ch. 1 Original
Ch. 1 Revision <-- New!
Ch. 2 Original
Ch. 2 Revision
Ch. 3 Original
Ch. 3 Revision: Coming Eventually
Ch. 4 Original
Ch. 4 Revision
Ch. 5 Original
Ch. 5 Revision
Ch. 6 Original
Ch. 6 Revise

**NoahDeRps** · 8th April 2011, 05:01 PM

Really great man. I enjoyed it.

**User Z** · 8th April 2011, 05:01 PM

cool story bro

**LSD** · 8th April 2011, 05:03 PM

Oh that Ross and his felinity.

**NoahDeRps** · 8th April 2011, 05:03 PM

Originally Posted by Zed lectric

cool story bro

i hope your are not being sarcastic and actually like it. i thin its cool

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 05:03 PM

**User Z** · 8th April 2011, 05:05 PM

MORE cool

........story bro

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 05:06 PM

**NoahDeRps** · 8th April 2011, 05:08 PM

cool story bro.jpg
this is cool. and i dont even like to read

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 05:08 PM

**NoahDeRps** · 8th April 2011, 05:13 PM

Very detailed and nice vocabulary

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 05:14 PM

**NoahDeRps** · 8th April 2011, 05:15 PM

yay. i wanna be a bad guy >

PPPPP

**Ross** · 8th April 2011, 11:18 PM

**Flybird** · 8th April 2011, 11:33 PM

Can I be in it??? Also this story is great. Well so far. I haven't read it all because I'm tired and going ot bed. I'll read the rest tomorrow.

Also I like the characters you added of playerz and noahray.

**Rammjet** · 9th April 2011, 08:25 AM

A committed effort, which earns you a thank, but the story is very fast pace. I suppose though any slower and you'd have to be posting ridiculosely long threads.

**NoahDeRps** · 9th April 2011, 08:28 AM

Originally Posted by Majigama

Okay... I think I got some profiles out...

Noah Ray: Assassin for the S.A.S.P.S. little known about him except he's a wolf, and he has strange crystal powers...

Zed Lect: An undercover guardian agent. Infiltraiting the S.A.S.P.S. headquarters, and giving guardians info once a month... lightning powers. An old friend of Samuel's...

Like?

cool

**Andaya** · 9th April 2011, 09:03 AM

Originally Posted by NoahRay007

cool

story

**[1/2]Lite** · 9th April 2011, 09:05 AM

Oyea this.

**Flybird** · 9th April 2011, 12:24 PM

I just read it all and it is really good. Can't wait for the rest.

Also

Originally Posted by NoahRay007

cool

Originally Posted by Andaya

story

Bro

Oh I like the end when Barricade says he just owned them.

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