You go talk to your friends
Talk to my friends
Talk to me
Things I think could use some work...
1. Muscles... They're a bit sloppy, but nonetheless well drawn.
2. One foot I see is a bit messed up... Though that can easily be fixed.
3. Wings aren't even. :S Common mistake.
4. Head is too big... Another common mistake.
That's all. Overall, 9.1/10
Every second, every minute, every hour, every day; it never ends.
You say this is suicide? I say this is a war, and I'm losing the battle.
It started with a whisper, and that was when I kissed her
And then she made my lips hurt
I could hear the chitchat, take me to your love shack
Mamas always gotta backtrack, when everybody talks back
old thread is old. I mean, this one's like two or three years old!